Kirsty - AS Media

Overall, I think Lauren's pitch was strong. I liked the idea of using technology to relate to a target audience of teenagers. One thing I might look to change however, is the amount of actors in the film. Where it seems there will be four antagonists, I would expect to at least half that, if not only focusing on one antagonist - as for me, this would make the idea a lot creepier and thus, scarier.